The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/07
I liked your use of imagery--the toaster, I assumed was the anger; the burned toast, the harm caused when the setting is not accurately positioned; and, possibly your poem gave a faint replica of argumentative banter where there is no concession. I enjoyed the poem, and poems are not really my choice for reading. I think they require deep thought,focus. Nice job!
08/21/07
Good descriptions of what it's like to fume with anger-just like a hot toaster! Interesting way to write about the anger topic.
Liked the title and your whole idea. I feel like that a lot and don't like it, thanks for sharing.