The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/07
You had me grappled in fear just as I perceived you were, when you got the news about the death of your mother from the officer. In my heart I wanted not to believe (just as you) that your mother was dead. Good job with your depiction of emotions, and holding my attention.
08/17/07
Congratulations, Jennifer. Your entry has placed 13th in Level 1. With so many entries in this level, you've really done well. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall is available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.
08/21/07
You wrote a story that gets to the heart of why we shouldn't hold onto our anger. We often can't predict when a loved one's life will end, and then we're left with a bitter pill to swallow from not being able to patch things up.