The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/07
Oh, I'm mad, too! I like the way your MC starts out - I was thinking, 'hmm, she sounds more forgiving than angry', then gets to the kicker. Very nice job!
08/21/07
Wow, sometimes a wife's inner radar is really trying to tell her something! I would be angry too if I found something like this. The betrayal is so painful and hurtful. Good writing.