The Official Writing Challenge
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08/13/07
Very good poem and a wonderful tribute to those who seek the lost. Your words are descriptive. Nice job
08/15/07
I had a little trouble finding the rhythm in the first stanza, but after that, the flow seemed smooth.
Nice descriptive words - I could feel the emotions as if I were the character.
Great reminder, too.
Thanks for sharing!
08/16/07
Congratulations, Christine, on placing 3rd in level 1! You did a great job expressing the anger emotion with your poem! If you sign on to the FaithWriter's Message Boards, The Writing Challenge, you can read the list of winners under the Weekly Results & Highest Rankings. Great job. :)
I like the depiction here and it is so true, there are so many hurting people who face homelessness or are missing. My heart tore for the mc in this piece. Keep up your writing. Good job!:0)
Wonderful tribute to those in the King's service. Congrats on the win.