The Official Writing Challenge
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What a funny title- and what a sad story. I'm sorry for you, but thankful that you take the promises of our Lord to heart. Be strong, and stand firm. God bless you.
This must be the outpourings of a mother's heart - not that I've ever been a mother. :) If it's purely fictitious, well, it sure fools me, because it was so well expressed. The title drew me in as well.
One suggestion: it makes it much easier to read online if you put in more paragraphs and paragraph spaces. Keep up the good writing.
Colleen, again, I love your writing! It's fresh and honest and I really appreciate how open you are with your heart. I lost my late husband's Bible once, and I was upset for several days. Finally, it turned up again, and I was so grateful. When we all get to Heaven, I will run and find you so we can introduce our "guys" to each other!
Again, a great story.