The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/07
What a funny title- and what a sad story. I'm sorry for you, but thankful that you take the promises of our Lord to heart. Be strong, and stand firm. God bless you.
08/10/07
This must be the outpourings of a mother's heart - not that I've ever been a mother. :) If it's purely fictitious, well, it sure fools me, because it was so well expressed. The title drew me in as well.
One suggestion: it makes it much easier to read online if you put in more paragraphs and paragraph spaces. Keep up the good writing.
08/16/07
Colleen, again, I love your writing! It's fresh and honest and I really appreciate how open you are with your heart. I lost my late husband's Bible once, and I was upset for several days. Finally, it turned up again, and I was so grateful. When we all get to Heaven, I will run and find you so we can introduce our "guys" to each other!
Again, a great story.