The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/07
I can relate!
I loved your comments intertwined in the verses - it made it real and made me smile.
What you wrote is so true for any habitual sin.
Thank you for sharing.
08/17/07
Wonderful! I like the way you incorporate the words of Paul with the thoughts you're feeling about your eating. I'm sure many of us have had the same discussions about our choices! You made many good points with clear writing.
Laury, this is great and I sure needed it too! I clicked on this right in the middle of eating a piece of apple pie that is NOT what I need at all! You hit the nail on the head with your good natured but no nonsense insight. Great piece of inspirational/motivational wisdom!! (This is the second comment I've tried to send. The first seemed to get lost in transition. If you wind up with two from me...that's why.)