The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/07
Well thought-out Bible study; thank you for taking the time to present it here!

I'd caution you against overuse of quotation marks. They're fine when used to quote sections of Scripture, but when you use them around other words or phrases, the implication is that you're using those phrases in an ironic way--not the effect you had intended. To mark off a specific word as one that you're expounding on, use italics. Otherwise, eleminate as many as possible. It will clear up some of the clutter in this excellent study of the Word.

Keep writing--this is good!
08/17/07
I agree. This is a good entry that will really shine with a bit of editing to add polish!