The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/07
Wow! Shockingly written. So sad for the situation at hand. How many of God's children live through these circumstances every day? Good writing.
08/14/07
Some powerful writing here. Needs some proofreading, though, to make it a polished piece.
08/14/07
I enjoyed reading your almost too detailed account of domestic violence. I especially liked your ending because there you gave advice as to what one should do "When Faced With Anger." Yes, God does love us, and He is the only One who really knows how to speak to our hearts when we almost lose our place. Good job!
08/17/07
Intense writng for an intense subject. You had me riveted to the words from beginning to end. I agree with Seema that with a little polishing, this is a story that can shine.