The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/07
Oh, I feel Grace's loneliness! There's nothing emptier than an empty nest. Thanks for the reminder of Who is with us.
08/02/07
My goodness! You expressed a lot through use of a small amount of words. Indeed, when the burial has taken place, and the repass is finished, the walls really do appear to close in on you when "everyone leaves to reenter life" but only if the person is looking through natural eyes.... Thank you for expressing this sense of void without ever mentioning the word "Sad."
08/03/07
Wow, what are you doing in beginners?? So much detail and feeling packed into so few words. Every word seems perfectly chosen. This article should do very well.
08/06/07
How sad. Well written and I could feel the feelings.
08/07/07
This proves that it doesn't take a long epistle to say what needs to be said. Brilliant message in a few brief sentences...and tells it like it is. I liked this one...very well done.