The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the time line of this piece and it was very easy to read. Well done.
Chris
08/03/07
I really liked your story line. It really makes me homesick for my dad. Great job!
08/03/07
I loved this! Well written. True emotions.
I'm glad I followed this link, too, that Brenda posted. So beautifully written. The three vignettes made me feel like I know this young woman, made me feel deeply for her. Well done! Thank you.
08/04/07
Simply outstanding.
08/05/07
The first sad entry to bring tears to my eyes. Beautifully written.
08/06/07
Great entry! I love the echoing story throughout these glimpses of her life. I started out smiling, but ended all choked up. The end is superb. Perfectly on topic, too. Above beginner-level in my opinion. Excellent!
08/06/07
Truly excellent writing. I like your main character and her Dad. I like the ending-pointing to the Father who never fails!
So beautifully written. This is one of my favorites this week.
08/09/07
Your story is nothing short of FABULOUS! I am humbled to think I even came close to you in ranking -- placing second. Please write more! God bless you. Congratulations on your win! In his service, your fellow writer, Dawn Thomason
First, Congratulations on 1st place and making EC! This deserves it. Beautiful!

This is so well written. I love the similar phrases throughout. Outstanding, tender,sad and hopeful. Great job.
Congratulations on first place. You could have not nailed this theme any better than this one and yet so masterfully highlighted and bordered with hope and promise. Spectacular writing hon. God bless you.keep up the writing.WOW!
08/09/07
Congrats on the level win and the EC!
08/09/07
Congratulations on your placing 1st! Your story was awesome! Keep writing for Him!
08/09/07
Wow wow WOW! Your characterization, parallelism, and storytelling abilities are absolutely first-rate. If I'd read this before the winners were announced, I would have said "you won't be in beginners for long" - now I'll say you won't be in INTERMEDIATE for long either. Excellent
08/11/07
Very nice piece! Congrats on your 1st place Beginner's & EC wins!
08/16/07
Congratulations on your EC. This is very well written, and so very touching. I love the answer from God. Great job.