The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for this. Wow! brainwork at 10:45 at night. This is very thought provking, I think I'll have to sleep on it:)
This is a very real depiction of the power of sadness - well done.
Next time if you break the paragraphs up with a space between thoughts it would make it so much more inviting to read.
Bless ya
Deep writing. I really liked this. A few sentences tended toward run-on, but a little tweaking is all that is needed. Good job!