The Official Writing Challenge
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Very clever. I liked the single word/short last lines of each stanza. I'm always comforted by the passage in the Bible that talks about how there will be no tears in heaven. Well done!
08/03/07
I really liked this poem. Powerfully written. God blesses your writing. Keep sharing!
08/04/07
This is by FAR my favorite on this level, and although I've not read the other levels yet, this may be my favorite this week. So, so excellent.
08/05/07
This poem is wonderful. It reflects the topic well and is creatively written.
08/07/07
Love your poem! The format, the message inside each stanza, all very powerful. GREAT ending.
08/14/07
This is wonderful! Congratulations on placing #6 in Level 1 and also for placing #37 in the Top 40 Rankings list!! Great job! The lists can be found on the forum boards and we'd love for you to join us, if you haven't already! Hugs! ~Peej