The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/07
Powerful writing here. God was beside you as you wrote this! Keep writing for His purpose.
08/04/07
"God wants us to know that it is all right to grieve..." Powerful line.

You can freshen up your writing by seeking to avoid common "Christian-isms" and finding new ways to express those timeless truths. And I frequently encourage people to avoid dictionary definitions--it's an overused device, and it's better to define your topic by anecdote or example.

This is a moving glimpse into the heart of our Savior.
08/07/07
Very good and very true. Nice job on expressing a truth that is valuable to those who mourn.