The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 482 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
This was a great description of the kind of day that we all have now and then. I love the little girl's name, too!
08/03/07
I got a little lost at first reading this but it ended very well. I too liked the little girls name. Well written.
08/04/07
I have such a weakness for sweet little girls--this touched me.

Be careful to do all the piddly edits; there were a few errors in punctuation and sentence structure.

Lots of people have added a note of hope to their pieces this week--you took it one step further!

08/05/07
Very appropriate name for the little girl. It made the story both touching and symbolic. Nice job!