The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/07
comforting words for a son to hear. Thanks for sharing.
08/03/07
Thanks for sharing this. My parents are both in their 70s and I have so many fears but after reading this I too will know where my parents are. God comfort your loss.
08/04/07
I wonderred if someone would write about SAD! Thanks for sharing this piece of your heart.

This was a bit confusing for me; it started out as a story in third person, then more than half-way through it became a piece of first-person nonfiction. If you edit it for another use, think about choosing just one of those approaches.

Great hook at the beginning.
08/04/07
Great story. Can I also suggest that for future articles you put a return carriage after each paragraph, it breaks it up and makes it easier to read.
08/05/07
Very good testimony. Your father's death may have saddened you but you have gone on to a greater purpose.