The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/07
This is absolutely beautiful! I have just returned from a mission trip to Zambia, and I saw many of the starving children of which you speak. May your piece be used by God to encourage the downtrodden, and to spur the abundantly blessed Americans to meet the needs of others. God bless you! Dawn Thomason
08/03/07
This was great! I could totally identify with the feelings you were expressing. Good job! Keep writing with blessings in mind.
08/04/07
Wonderful use of alliteration in this heartfelt piece!

I wasn't clear on the meaning of this line: when I think of tangled limbs among plastic and card... , but I'm glad I pushed through and kept reading.

I like the structure; it's almost poetic.
08/05/07
Some of these images are difficult to read but I love the hope you give us at the end. Nice work
Wow - great writing