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I loved this! It took me back to the day where I stood and for the first time ever, became the daugther of a king. You described the emotions and the internal debate/struggle very well. Way to go.
07/29/07
Quite good and your descriptions are really vivid. Thanks for sharing your article!
07/30/07
What a beautiful account of conversion. I am a poor speller byself so I don't think you meant to use the word venerable. But you story spoke to my heart. Thans!
07/30/07
See, I made 2 spelling errors in my critique. Twice as many as you did in your intire story. Am I embarrashed!
I could feel the emotion in this piece. There are a couple of grammatical errors, but nothing major. It is well done, and a very enjoyable read.