The Official Writing Challenge
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I especially like the part about forgetting the meaning of the ressurection. I get all upset sometimes, and it doesn't seem to matter that I'm SAVED. The interest was high through the whole thing. I might have built up the embarrassment a little more, put a little more of the main characters feelings about this part. Maybe make it more important for him somehow. Maybe add some dialogue( :.

It's hard for me to find improvable points in this story.Good Job!
07/28/07
The beginning and middle were well-written. I was a bit disappointed in the ending, though. How did the MC become "unstuck"?
07/29/07
Yes, well written! And most of your devotional is very good, but I also would have liked to know what happened to the "Jesus" in the tomb!
08/03/07
Congratulations, Loretta. Your entry has placed 10th in Level 1. With so many entries in this level, you've really done well. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall is available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.