The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/07
Creative and cleverly written.
07/29/07
Cute story and written very well!
07/30/07
What an interesting story! I loved the word game she had created. I think I'll use it myself when I'm waiting in the doctor's office to make my time more useful. But the crowning jewel of your story was the connection between Jesus and embarrashment. He love Him, but sometimes we are uncomfortable in talking to others about Him. All the words that connected your mind to Jesus were positive words, but you really struggled with the word embarrashed. But the connection was right on. Great!
08/01/07
I love this game - and the result she came to. Very thought-provoking.
This is a very clever story. I think I'll play the game also with my kids. Good job.
08/01/07
This seemed to alive. Great writing, I could play the game too!