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07/27/07
Good teen drama! I like the "humiliated to dust" line too, nice touch! I could feel her embarassment, especially when it's hard to hide from being the only Nancy!
07/29/07
I love your opening line! To teens, the world seems to be focused on them. I remember learning these lessons, too. Your writing drew me in and kept me reading!
07/29/07
Surely I will have to comment as you mention Anne Shirley (I live in PEI) of Green Gables.
This is well written and easy to read. You conveyed the necessity of being truthful in addition to portraying the angst of teenage emotions. Good job.
08/01/07
Very well written story of what teens go through. I enjoyed this very much. It was an easy read with no starts and stops. :)
08/03/07
Congratulations, Nancy. Your entry has placed 8th in Level 1. With so many entries in this level, you've really done well. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall is available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.