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07/27/07
What a tragedy! You certainly nailed this one down good. I wasn't expecting the whole tower to come crashing down. I thought that maybe he couldn't remember his speech or something. good job.
Good verse to wrap it up!
07/28/07
Good story with a great message. How many people are building their lifes without consideration of the foundation under them, their beliefs, faith, goals. How many people do each of us know who seem to be succeeding but without Christ as their foundation. Their lives will crumble in the end and their efforts come to nought. Good job.
07/29/07
This is well written and easily read. The point of your story is clear, too. I like the scripture at the end; it puts a real punch to the problem the architect caused by his error.
07/29/07
Good writing here! I was in shock when the building started sinking. The story might be a bit unbelievable, but you did a good job of telling it. Nicely done!
Great take on the verse you have at the end. I was surprised when the building fell. You kept me interested throughout. Good job.
08/03/07
Congratulations, Christopher. Your entry has placed 6th in Level 1. With so many entries in this level, you've really done well. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall is available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.