The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/07
Wow! You have a lot going on here. Lots of information and very interesting comparisons. Thanks for sharing.
07/28/07
Your story seems to be a list of behaviors that upset you. And for good reason. I find most of those things grieve me, rather than embarrash me. Perhaps you are young and are struggling with the unfairness any hypocracy in the religious community. Better to light a candle than curse the dark.
It would be easier to read if you spaced your paragraphs. May God use you to made a positive difference.