The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/07
Aww! This was cute and fun. I liked the glimpse of the beach and the form of sharing a memory. Good. Just remember to add some extra spaces for easier reading. ^_^
What a cute story. I wonder if Mom forgot something like elastic to make it still fit when wet. A good one. Keep on writing.
07/29/07
Oh, nothing could be worse to a little five year old girl! A cute story! Thanks for sharing it. :)
07/31/07
Certainly an embarrassing moment! You could also help your article to flow more by
breaking it into several paragraphs, and, add dialogue for dramatic effect.