The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/07
Once we travel outside of the US, we can never again remain ignorant to what the rest of the world endures and the sacrifices many will make to have a better life. Good points in your story.
I would like to know the setting of this story. You did a good job of producing an "academic" voice throughout. The ending was not what I expected, but I liked that the relationship was renewed.