The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/05
Simply beautiful. You really captured the difficulty we can have trusting, in accepting love and most of all the difficulty recognizing when Jesus is trying to reach out to us! Again, beautiful. Thank-you for sharing your heart through your writing.
I agree with the last comment. A lovely poem that shows how your mother's hand reached out across the stubborness to provide you with access to your Creator.
05/16/05
Hi Lisa. Just a quick note to encourage you and let you know that although your beautiful poem didn't actually receive an award this week, it did make it into the semi-finals for the Level 1 Challenge. Well done! You're definitely on the "write" track. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)