The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/07
The MC has a great voice. It made me laugh, which helps with being "happy". Good job.
07/19/07
What a dear story! Loved the title! I laughed out loud as I read it and still have a smile on my face.

Great job! You have a real gift for descriptive writing!
07/20/07
Very good story! I love your main character and the writing flows beautifully. Really fun to read; it made me happy!
This was hilarious and I loved it. I laughed until the tears rolled and shared it with two other people. Great job! I gave it high rankings. Thanks for the enjoyable read. Cyndy
I love the humor throughout this piece. If I ever see a bear up close, I may just have to laugh. I'm sure I'll never remember what song to sing, but I'll think of your story! Some very good writing here.
07/26/07
Congratulations, Dianne! First place!! Woo-hoo!!
Congratulation on your 1st place win! Very entertaining story and well written.
This was such a fun read! Congratulations on your win!!
07/26/07
Way to go, Dianne! I'm proud to know you! Onward and upward!
07/26/07
WONDERFULLY WRITTEN, HIGHLY HUMOROUS PIECE, DIANNE!! :D I add my CONGRATULATIONS to the others on your 1ST PLACE WIN!!!!!!!!
07/26/07
Great humor in this. Congrats on 1st place in Beginner's!
07/29/07
Oh, Dianne, did I ever LOVE this one! Your humor....your timing...is PERFECT! Your voice was excellent: so relaxed, so natural. Somebody's got talent.....! Way to go. A well deserved first place win. Look out, intermediates. This gal's goin' straight for the top!
I'll just ditto Marilee's comment here. You have a gift for humor.
10/01/07
How come I missed this one? I love it!
One suggestion when having a bear con-furry-frontation (this could be a good discussion thread) is to sing one of the grand old hymns that the monster could relate to: "Gladly, the Cross-eyed Bear." (that's what I thought it said when I was 6yo) or "We shall Paws in Thy Presence den.." Easy! (Not!)