The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/07
What a tender story. Not having quotation marks around the dialogue was a bit distracting, but this tale truly touched my heart. Lovely.
07/21/07
You have touched my heart this morning! I love the end: "I'll see you there." Perfect.

Well done! Thanks for the blessing. :)
07/21/07
Cute & sweet story with a great ending!
07/21/07
Aww, this is very sweet. I like the ending, too. You have a very nice way of describing things. Thanks for sharing this super story!
You played on my heartstrings and I loved the melody God gave you. Loved this.... You write from the heart. English mechanics can be learned but heart writing is a gift from God that you either have it or you don't, and you have it!
A precious story. It has a complex message woven throughout its simplicity. Well done.
07/23/07
A wonderful little story, the concept worked so well, delightful, but full of truth and meaning. Have a challenge buddy look over your work, a number of small errors that could easily be corrected. Good job overall.
This is a delightful story. I enjoyed it.