The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/05
Bittersweet tears of a cherished daughter. Your story is well-written and a reminder of how quickly our children grow from one phase of life to another. We are blessed to be a part of those phases.
I like the way you wrote this in paragraphs.
Thank you for a pleasant moment reading your text.
Thanks, this is beautiufl and well written: Thanks for taking me back through the years with my four girls.
Beautifully written as you go through the various stages of your daughter's growth and development and the love you shared with her.
05/16/05
Beautiful! Congratulations on the win :)
Darlene
05/16/05
Congratulations on this wonderful win Jan! Well done. 1st place in the Level 1 Challenge, but also, 8th place in the Editors' Choice. What a great win when you consider the competition there was for this Challenge. It was a big week. Well done. So, I think it's definitely time for you to move up a level. You're ready for it. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Okay, your tears brought tears to my eyes. A lovely piece. Congratulations!
07/25/05
What a great story! I have an only child..daughter... about to be married and it did bring back so many memories!
This is so touching! No wonder it was a winner.