The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/07
Wonderful message here - and a great "walk-through" of all God has given us. A little work on punctuation and grammar and this would be even better!
07/23/07
Good start on a great message! Thank you for sharing! =)
07/24/07
Very insightful poem. Spoken with great confidence and grace.
Some good lessons and truths here. I enjoyed reading this. Be sure to proofread and check punctuation and line structure.