The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/07
I love the phrase "God breathed on me this morning...". Thanks for sharing your poetry and God bless your writing!
07/16/07
Yay! I love poetry. You have a lot of good word pictures. This stanza I especially liked, "“Sure it is time to get ready for your work my dear child,
but please take a few more minutes with me” he smiled." I can just see God smiling at us. Thanks!
07/17/07
Oh what a wonderful poem. It is nice to hear from Jesus's perspective. Very nicely done.