The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/07
What a gem! Your writing paints very clear word pictures. I enjoyed reading every bit of your story. Thanks for sharing your talent!
07/13/07
Very nice story, really enjoyed reading it. If you took out a few comma's it would flow 100%, but still very nice. Great job.
07/16/07
I was cheering for the boy riding his bicycle without training wheels. I said "ouch" when he fell. (I remember those bikes with banana seats too. :)

I really like this sentence. "Today I think back on that and about how many times my Heavenly Father tells me: get up and try again, everything will be all right." Thanks for sharing this story.