The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/07
Your devotional is well written and interesting. Thanks for sharing it; it gave me plenty to think about while I was reading it!
You did a great job of describing the setting, and drew some very good applications from it. I especially appreciated how you pointed out that we cannot always believe what we are seeing. I'm so thankful that we can go to the Lord in prayer and can read His perfect Word. I know He will help us to discern what is true from what is only an illusion as we stay close to Him.
God Bless,
Elizabeth
07/16/07
You have a very unique illustration for the topic. I like this thought too, "I also need to remember to keep my life focused on Christ. The young adult concentrated so much on playing the game that nothing else bothered him." What a challenge for us to be so taken-up with Christ that we fail to let the cares of this world affect us. Thanks for the challenge your writing gave me.