The Official Writing Challenge
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Very touching story. I could feel the daughter's anguish when she lost her father...also liked the analogy between earthly and heavenly Father.
07/14/07
This is a lovely story with good descriptions. I got slightly confused by the first jump in time but then grasped what you were doing.Well written.
07/15/07
Well written. I think everyone who has had to let go of someone can relate. I also like the name Delilah and the fact that you frequently mentioned her hair. Cute detail.
07/17/07
Beautiful story.
07/19/07
A beautiful story, and very well written. Congratz on 2nd place
Beautiful! Congratulations on a well deserved win!
Lovely and full of vivid description. Illustrates well the important role a father plays in how a girl views herself, whether confident, or seeking reassurance in wrong places. Very touching!
07/19/07
Congratulations of your EC. This is very well written -- I could "see" each scene unfolding. Nice job.
07/19/07
Wow. This almost made me a bit teary. (It would've helped to have more space or something in between the different sections. Having them follow so closely together confused me at first, before I noticed the pattern.) Congrats on your win!