The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/07
Great application, and an enjoyable life illustration to make it. Try showing a little more and telling a little less next time. On a different tack - do I spy a fellow Brit?!
07/14/07
Wow, what an experience! Your opening lines drew me in--they were great. It would be wonderful to read more of that particular event. There's some huge lessons here and events to package the lessons in. Keep writing!!
07/15/07
You have some good lessons from a rope!! Thanks for this!
07/16/07
You need a lot more words to describe your trip more fully. For the Challenge, maybe limit yourself to the lessons learned from just the one incident? I know it's hard to do! But then you'd be able to really flesh it out. (I did an OB course once, great stuff!)