The Official Writing Challenge
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Great application, and an enjoyable life illustration to make it. Try showing a little more and telling a little less next time. On a different tack - do I spy a fellow Brit?!
Wow, what an experience! Your opening lines drew me in--they were great. It would be wonderful to read more of that particular event. There's some huge lessons here and events to package the lessons in. Keep writing!!
You have some good lessons from a rope!! Thanks for this!
You need a lot more words to describe your trip more fully. For the Challenge, maybe limit yourself to the lessons learned from just the one incident? I know it's hard to do! But then you'd be able to really flesh it out. (I did an OB course once, great stuff!)