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07/13/07
A great article for a beginner. I like the way you showed the difference between a Christian and one who is just religious, through your dialogue and without preaching. The peace that the postie felt is the peace we get when we stand up for the Lord.
07/13/07
I like your answer about not being a hypocrite, just a human. Good story and good points presented!
07/14/07
I too like the way you described what a Christian was. Well done story.
07/17/07
It was interesting to me to see the change in your main character as you progressed. He seemed very reluctant in the beginning, as though he really didn't want to be noticed, or to witness. But when he was noticed, he didn't hesitate at all. Good application.