The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/07
"I believe God spies me up here...". I love this line and I love your writing. You capture so many shifting emotions and feelings of a teen who's seeking for something just out of reach. I think many teens could relate to your story. It's wonderful.
06/22/07
Your title grabbed me because I have always had a thinking place. WHen I was a teen and even now years and years later. I remember the things I tried to sort out and could relate so much to your writing. You have a real gift with your descriptive words and I enjoy the way you express yourself. Your heart in this piece made me reflect. Good writing.
07/04/07
You've captured the heart of many a teen with this article. A lot of questions arise during teen years. I would have liked to have seen a solution here, but I filled in my own thoughts and desires. I hope your ending was the same as mine. This is true to life.