The Official Writing Challenge
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06/21/07
Congrats on placing Highly Commended... I really enjoyed this one, Great Job!
I like the way you have your MC think her way through her problem, and realize that what she is experiencing wasn't the way things should be. Good job writing this!
This is really good. I'm so sorry to have missed this earlier. You have described a situation so common among teens today and have done it very well. The ending was perfect. Good job. Congrats on the "Highly Commended". You'll be moving up soon.
Congrats Kathy
As always a great job!
06/21/07
Well done Kathy! This touches an important area in relationships. I'm sure it's going to help someone.

Congrads on your Highly Commended! Way to go! Y.
06/24/07
Wow! I LOVE this introspective look by teen blessed by God with wisdom. Beautiful flow - you writing is natural and a pleasure to read. Congrats on you HC!!!!
Good pov article for teens. I hope it will be read by many.