The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/07
Wow! Awesome writing! My heart hurts for Ashley. Great work getting inside her head and describing the feelings and doubts. This could definitely be a winner. :)
06/16/07
Excellent, AMAZING description, and the emotions are SO real. You will NOT be in beginners long!
Many young girls stand at this threshold. This was well done.
06/18/07
Excellent story! Very moving and realistic. Good job!
"My child." - Awesome. Isn't that the greatest truth in the universe? :-)
Very powerful writing ...my heart ached for Ashley.
06/19/07
I loved this! To know so many young girls struggle with the choice that is God's to make. This was powerful writing!
06/20/07
A very engaging story, raising a very contemproary issue. It gives great hope to the youth today. I liked the ending the most. A very good peice of work.
06/28/07
Excellent story. You capture emotions well.