The Official Writing Challenge
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06/18/07
This such a wonderful testimony to God's grace and compassion.
06/18/07
Your title intrigued me, and your story kept me reading! I like this and think teens could relate very well to the message you so vividly describe. God bless your writing!
06/20/07
A beautiful, inspriring, thought provoking stroy. Keep it up.
You communicated the twisted logic of the teenage mind just right. Such a great story of grace. Thanks
This is a very good example article to teens. One bad choice can bring a lot of heartache. But God is forgiving.
07/03/07
A nice way of addressing the rebellion that's in all of us, especially at an age where we are discovering our identity and any sense of significance. I hope many more teens read this.
I've discovered that dialog can often be more compelling than narration, or a little at least can break it up a bit. You handled the narration well though.
This is a beautiful devotional piece.