The Official Writing Challenge
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06/18/07
I remember very well the feelings you've described in your story. Many teens could relate to what you've written here! God bless your writing. :)
Well done...this is a topic close to a teen's heart. I especially liked the fact that you ended without giving a pat answer...I think at times that can be the most frustrating for a teenager: to read story after story with beautiful endings when their own life seems so tangled and without answers. I liked how you ended with the journaling again. :D
06/28/07
Wonderful piece. I could relate to the emotions in it.