The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/07
I like this very much. Your story addresses a topic most boys think about and the last line points to a man any boy could emulate. Good story!
06/18/07
This is a question many of us continue to ask. You picked a particular point where this question comes into focus. Who an I just changes it's focus from whiskers at age 15 or 16 to who am I as retirement time arrives...am I my job or am I something more than that. Thanks for reminding us of the unasked questions of teens. The ones they are sure we're too stupid to answer. Good story. Proof read for smooth transitions between thoughts.