The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 660 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
06/15/07
This is a cute story. I had a friend in High School who was appalled that her parents were having a baby! But she also adjusted and had fun with her little brother. Teens could relate to this!
Good idea for a teen story and good writing. To make it even better try coupling dialogue with action rather than "she said, she explained" etc. You did an excellent job of depicting embarrasment and frustration in daughter.