The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful prayer, and a lovely way to portray the needs of children and the love and gentleness of their Heavenly Father. Well done!
06/10/07
Lovely! Its simplicity makes it just right. A very nice prayer for our children.
Really a good little poem here. In proofreading you will want to change this. "Remind them their (should be they're for they are) never quite out of your sight." But this is really good and well written.
06/12/07
What a lovely prayer for all children! Very sweet.
Simply beatiful