The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like the simple yet very deep comparison between shadows and the Lord. Very well done. It's a keeper.:0) God bless your writing. Janice
06/10/07
Very, very good and just enough explanation to give the message. A child could easily understand it, and I can easily see it inspiring them to run outside and look for their shadows! Nice work
This is a good Sunday School lesson. It could be improved by bringing a little "color or life" into the writing. Naming the children who are speaking would help some. But don't let this discourage you. This is a very good thought and the writing is good too.
06/12/07
I also think this would be a good story to use in Sunday School or Children's Church. Good idea!