The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful message here.
Those girls sound just like my soon-to-be-11 year old. You really captured the mindset.Well done!
06/10/07
Sweet story and kids would definitely relate to it. Well done! You have definitely found the right POV for kids, here.
06/12/07
Your story took me back to middle school! These girls sound just right for their age and setting and the moral is clear. Girls would like this!