The Official Writing Challenge
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06/10/07
Wow! A harrowing experience, to be sure. This would have fit in with "adventure" or "mystery" but you made it work for the kids' theme. Nice work.
A good story and good pov. The bulletin board is a good idea. We need to know what's going on in our households.
06/12/07
I think this story would really be appealing to the 'tweens. They love a mystery!