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Topic: Write something suitable for CHILDREN (05/31/07)
TITLE: Little Rain
By Renee McKee
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Today we are going to have a new baby. Are we ready to go to the hospital ask the Grandmother. Oh! Yes, said Grandpa. But what about Big Te is he ready to go. “I don’t know,” said dad, I will go check on him said Grandmother. As walking up the stairs she heard Big Te, talking. She stopped to listen. Big Te was saying, “What is the big deal about going to the hospital,” “No, one got that excited about me coming home.” I just understand. I will have to share that baby with my mommy and daddy. Why do I have to go. I want to be the only one.” I want to be the one they call baby and love on. I wont get that anymore. Baby’s they just stink.” Grandmother then walked in the door, and gave Te a hug. He cried and said, “Grandmother will I always be your baby.” Yes, she replied.
Te wanted to know why every one so excited about the baby. Grandmother said, see Te mommy and daddy wanted to have a sister for you so you would not be alone. And that is why we have to go to the hospital to see your mommy and new sister.” Grandmother, Te said, “ Where you excited when I was born.” Grandmother shook her head with Joy and said Oh, yes Big Te.” See, Te, you where the every first grandchild to be born, and that was a wonderful day and it still is a wonderful day. Now we get to share that day all over again with your sister.” Te looked at Grandpa and said are you excited to share me with sister. Grandpa said,” Yes, Te I a happy that you will get to have a sister to play with when she gets older.” I was not that lucky to have any one to play with. I was the only child. Te, looked at his grandpa sad and started to cry. Grandpa, said, “ Now, Now grandson it will be okay.” Why are you crying?” Because you did not have a sister to play with. Grandpa took Big Te and put him on his lap and said, “It is okay that I did not have a sister or brother because I had lots of friends.” Te, dried his eyes and got down form his Grandpa’s lap and said, “ I want to go see my sister now.” I want to tell her about all the fun we are going to have with our Grandpa, and Grandmother. I want to go to the hospital now.
They left to go see baby sister and mommy. Te wanted mommy to know how happy he was to see his baby sister. When they got there to the hospital Te said, Hey! I don’t know her name. Grandmother and Grandpa said, “At the same time said we don’t either.” That made them want to hurry up even more to go see the new baby. When they got to the room. Te’s mom was glad to see them. She looked at Te and said, “Te, meet your little sister Little Rain. And that was her name Little Rain. Te, liked the name. He never once asked why they named her Little Rain, he was just happy to see her and his mommy.
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