The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/07
Cute story. Sounds like a couple of my cats: one is bold, one is shy. You told the story with intrigue and kept the reader wanting to read to the end. I'm surprised you do not enter at a higher level of writing. I hope this encourages you. It is meant to.
Good story for children. I liked the difference in the two personalities.
This is so cute. I like the lively action and intrigue. Very nicely written. The title is neat and would grab kids attention with the rhyming names.Good job.Janice
This is so cute. I like the lively action and intrigue. Very nicely written. The title is neat and would grab kids attention with the rhyming names.Good job.Janice
This is so cute. I like the lively action and intrigue. Very nicely written. The title is neat and would grab kids attention with the rhyming names.Good job.Janice
This is so cute. I like the lively action and intrigue. Very nicely written. The title is neat and would grab kids attention with the rhyming names.Good job.Janice
This is so cute. I like the lively action and intrigue. Very nicely written. The title is neat and would grab kids attention with the rhyming names.Good job.Janice
This is so cute. I like the lively action and intrigue. Very nicely written. The title is neat and would grab kids attention with the rhyming names.Good job.Janice
This is so cute. I like the lively action and intrigue. Very nicely written. The title is neat and would grab kids attention with the rhyming names.Good job.Janice
This is so cute. I like the lively action and intrigue. Very nicely written. The title is neat and would grab kids attention with the rhyming names.Good job.Janice
This is so cute. I like the lively action and intrigue. Very nicely written. The title is neat and would grab kids attention with the rhyming names.Good job.Janice
This is so cute. I like the lively action and intrigue. Very nicely written. The title is neat and would grab kids attention with the rhyming names.Good job.Janice
This is so cute. I like the lively action and intrigue. Very nicely written. The title is neat and would grab kids attention with the rhyming names.Good job.Janice
06/11/07
I finally found it! I have a "Skat", but I wish she were a "Kat."

If you come back to this piece, consider changing it to past tense--it's easier for young children to understand.

A cat piece will always steal my heart, and this one is no exception.
06/11/07
Very cute and clever
06/12/07
Very cute and appealing characters! Children will love these kitty adventurers. :)
06/13/07
Cute cat story