The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/07
I hope Bo was a black lab. I had one, named Bo. He was the greatest so of course your title drew me in and I felt all the emotions of the story. I liked the ending; only way it could have been better for me would be if Bo had led them to find him. Blessings.
You had me scared! I was right there with the boy. Great job!
This is so good. A good lesson here for children.
Well done. it was exicting to try to find my way with the boy and I was wondering what happened to "Bo". I was relieved at the end to know that the boy and his dog were safe. Good ending. Nice work. This would be good in a Sunday School lesson for chidlren. Keep up the good work,Janice