The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/07
Good job! You captured the thoughts of a child very well.
I enjoyed this very much. It teaches a great lesson for children.
Very good. Good reading for a child. Wonderful pov.
The lump from Peter's chest grew in mine throughout the story and spilled out of my eyes at the end.
Yes, yes, and yes, we need more change of our hearts. Let's teach the young the power of Jesus love - to the least of these. Well done.